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Posted: 09:12:02 on April 07 2003
By: Steve Krutzler
Dept: Enterprise | stenterprise.com
Following its February feature on "Can STAR TREK Be Saved?" (story), TV Guide solicited opinions from readers about how to fix the potentially ailing franchise, in light of diminished ratings and box office returns. The magazine has published many of these remarks in its new issue, available on newsstands today.

Here's a sampling of some of the comments made available at TV Guide Online recently.

Rich Matheson: "Star Trek at its best has always been something that teaches people. Going through high school with the Next Generation playing every week taught me about real human issues, science, history, philosophy; the works. Recent Trek has shied away from covering issues of morality and historical importance, in favor of explosions and boobs. Sex does sell, but it cheapens the whole deal. Characters who could be interesting and deep, like Seven of Nine and T'Pol, are relegated to skin-tight outfits and decontamination scenes. Though the characters do develop, it's more of an afterthought. You never get past the shameless outfits and outrageously large breasts."

Mitzi Dikerson: "Stop reworking old Trek plots. Any given week's plot seems ripped from the original or from TNG. Hell, I've even seen shades of Voyager. Maybe if the writers start from the beginning, clean slate; after all, no one has done this before, so stop culling from other shows because we've got them memorized and we know when you're cribbing. Jump in and create the Trek world from the beginning."

Dwight Bennett: "1. The story lines must continue for more than one episode . 2. Introduce a character that is an enigma to the crew and to the audience. This person will not actually be a member of the crew but will appear only when he is most needed. The crew will not be sure they can trust him but his wisdom and fighting skill will become a much needed asset . This character will be feared by those who have heard of him and will be believed to be a myth . His true agenda will revolve around the success and failure of certain Enterprise missions (which ones he's not saying ), also his technology will be more advanced than Starfleet's and even the Vulcans. 3. Show us more as to how everything the Enterprise crew does now has an affect on the future missions of other Enterprise crews 4. Make the action faster . This is supposed to be the future , yet the show moves at a dinosaur's pace. And for god's sake give this crew some new moves."

Barry Rice: "1. Loosen up the formula. The last four Trek shows have used the same handful of predictable plot formulas over and over again. There was some freedom in DS9, but Enterprise and Voyager have become almost identical. 2. Bring in new blood. Enterprise promised to do this, but has so far failed to live up to its promise. Other than a few new writers, we've got the same make-up, the same directors, and the same production designers. If you want Trek to feel fresh, it has to be fresh. 3. Be more realistic. Why do all of the sets have to be so well lit? Why do all of the aliens have to be basically human, only with different foreheads? Why does everyone's uniform have to be perfectly pressed and buttoned?"

Carl Brzebien: "The mere fact that viewers are being asked for suggestions to help fix trek suggests that perhaps its time for the baton to be passed to a new generation of producers. It is all too apparent to the fans that the current producers have lost focus and simply don't care and placed profits before quality. The best way to fix anything is to first discover what is wrong. In the case of Star Trek I cannot think of anything that is right, except perhaps its time slot. What's wrong? Well, the long list includes the poor crew interaction, the lack of strong character identities, the casting, the set lighting, the set's visual coloring ( it reminds me of a black and white daytime soap) and the dialogue .While it's true that sex sells, shame on the producers for having to stoop to this level to substitute for poor storylines and writing. What made Star Trek a success is simple . For four decades the crew, each with their defined individual personalities, reacted to each other, a mission, space, or an alien race or threat. Star Trek's latest version needs a face lift."

Read more reader inputs at this page and/or pick up the latest issue of TV Guide.

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Season Two (2002-2003)
Prod #Title Airdate
128 Shockwave, Part II 9/18/02
127 Carbon Creek9/25/02
129 Minefield10/02/02
131 Dead Stop10/09/02
130 A Night In Sickbay10/16/02
132 Marauders10/30/02
133 The Seventh11/06/02
134 The Communicator11/13/02
135 Singularity11/20/02
136 Vanishing Point11/27/02
137 Precious Cargo12/11/02
138 The Catwalk12/18/02
139 Dawn1/08/03
140 Stigma2/05/03
141 Cease Fire2/12/03
142 Future Tense2/19/03
143 Canamar2/26/03
144 The Crossing4/2/03
145 Judgment4/9/03
146 Horizon4/16/03
147 The Breach4/23/03
148 Cogenitor4/30/03
149 Regeneration5/7/03
150 First Flight5/14/03
151 Bounty5/14/03
152 The Expanse5/21/03
Season One (2001-2002)
TREKWEB TALKBACK
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How soon we forget
By tes1701 ( tes1701@midsouth.rr.com) at 14:09:25 on April 08 2003
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I remember when TNG first came out. I heard fans say that it would never work. Some people were so outraged that they would do Star Trek without Kirk and Spock that they vowed never to watch this new incarnation. I was optimistic myself. I loved Star Trek and wanted to see more. I didn't care who was on the show. The commonly held opinion is that TNG really hit its stride in season 3. They changed the uniforms and gave the show a new look. They even changed the opening credits. TNG was a hit beyond all expectations, but it took some time for the show to really come together. One could argue that the same could be said of DS9. No one can deny that DS9 had slow beginnings. It was overshadowed by TNG at its best and the fanfare of a new series called Voyager. Some how Ira Behr and Ron D. Moore just kept on making good shows and by the third season with the introduction of the Defiant and then the fourth season with Worf the show just took off. DS9 from the 5th season on was riveting. It capitalized on the continuing plot line more so than any Star Trek before or since. I think Enterprise is a good show, but let us not forget that it took its predecessor some time to get their space legs too. By the way, why are so many people intent on getting rid of Rick Berman? He was handed the reigns by Gene and he led the franchise through all the successes it has enjoyed for more than 16 years. I for one will give him the benefit of the doubt. Remember it's a TV show, not a way of life. I'll go one further, Star Trek is a business designed to make Paramount as much money as possible. Quality and orginality are a function of profitability. Rick B & Co. are there to make money as well. Its a job to them. Ask yourself if you want the general public examining the way you do your job, second guessing your every move? Just something to think about.

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ENTERPRISE gets a bad rap that it doesn't deserve.
By Blok_Narpin ( philly_guy_pa@yahoo.com.yahoo.com) at 13:19:27 on April 08 2003
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THe show is quite good. It'a a major improvment from Voyager (I still think every episode of Voyager should be burned and stuck in a landfill).


Season One of Enterprise created a good foundation to build upon. Sure, it wasn't Trek at it's best but it WAS better then Next Generation's first 2 seasons and better then all seven seasons of Voyager. It was a good start.

Season Two has built on that. This season has been much better then last. There still is a ways to go, and some shows have been duds (Vanishing Point) but look at all the great episodes we got this season. Minefield. Shockwave II. Carbon Creek. The Seventh. Stigma. Cease Fire. My point is this has been a strong season, but people keep harping on the bad episodes. THey do 26 shows a year --- they won't all be great. THe fact is we are getting more good ones then we are bad ones.

Can this show improve? Yes, of course. But while it can improve, it's not bad now!



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What's wrong with.....
By da Giez ( da-giez@charter.net) at 23:05:36 on April 07 2003
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"outrageously large breasts" .....

:)

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Imitation is no longer the best form of flattery
By Deslok ( hammond_ecks@hotmail.com) at 17:48:50 on April 07 2003
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The problem as I see it is that the Star Trek franchise has taken to imitating it's own imitators. The bottom line is that ST:ENTERPRISE has become stale by feeding on it's own shed skin... YUCK!!!

They're also not being very adventurous, either in the actual teleplays, or in the overall thinking that goes into making the show. Everything is a safe bet, no guts no glory, just predictable stuff. Bleah!!!

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Kill Porthos??
By John ( ) at 14:51:32 on April 07 2003
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I just read the article in the magazine. One person said to kill Porthos off. As far as I'm concerned Porthos is the best character on the show.

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Sets "WELL LIT?"
By Johnny ( ) at 13:49:02 on April 07 2003
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Why do all of the sets have to be so well lit?

Well lit my ass!! I can barely see whats going on on-screen, everything is so dark!

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Fixing Star Trek
By BWilliams ( BWillNCC1701E@webtv.net) at 13:18:20 on April 07 2003
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I was watching TNG Year 7's featurettes yesterday (finally got that set and DS9 Year 1 at last!), and Rick Berman said something to the effect of, "It will be interesting to see what happens when someone comes after me and picks up the ball."

Sounds like he's sealing his own fate, because that just echoes what a lot of us have been saying:

Get rid of Rick Berman! Get some people in who know how to write some smart scripts and take chances. And here's a list of those people who would know just how to take chances with Enterprise: Michael Piller, Ronald D. Moore (going solo and without his running buddy Brannon Braga), and Ira Steven Behr.

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Okay with minor exceptions.
By Hbasm ( ) at 12:29:33 on April 07 2003
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While I think those comments are candid and useful for the producers, I don't see how they only show tight outfits and that character development is an afterthought. They're trying to mix all those ingredients to a level where it's visible but not dominating.

I'm surprised as usually, how people think Enterprise is no better than Voyager. I think Voyager had bigger problems, for example: Nearly every episode had a battle ship against ship. The crew stood on the bridge to defend their lifes against aliens who wanted to destroy or take over the ship with little or no provocation; in other words with little or no meaning, and little reason beyond being "the bad guys".

For teenagers, this probably wasn't too much of a problem for Voyager. There was action (although with a predictable outcome) and teens respond easier to action than diagloue with a deeper meaning.

Enterprise has a bit more diversity, and much more character development. I think the show is well balanced in speed, action and plot, and has a lot of stories that spand more than one episode, compared to Voyager.

Another problem with Voyager was the insane speed of dialogue. That didn't give us time to think, our time to respond with emotions. Sometimes, there were some clever themes on the menue, high-tech stories, but only genetically altered people would be able to grasp things at that SPEED.

But it seems to me, the producers are now looking in the right direction, since they started Enterprise. If we give them time and moral support, they'll do their jobs even better.

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Intrigue and boobs
By MikeNinNH ( ) at 10:15:21 on April 07 2003
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I like what one fan said about introducing a character that's an enigma to the audience. Garak is a great example of how an intriguing character can spice up whatever episode he/she is in.

I do have to point out to the "boob patrol" out there that TNG wasn't afraid to show some flesh either. Deanna Troi's outfits were often revealing. Though I have to admit, they were also often quite elegant, at least on her. The long turquoise dress with the low neckline was a good example of both grace and beauty.

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What do you think?
By Berman My Man ( ) at 09:52:29 on April 07 2003
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So Steve, I realize TV Guide didn't ask you for your opinion, but I'd be curious to know what you think.

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